1st Draft Feedback
Introduction – Your hook is not hooking / Did you really start with a question?
the background information is not developed . Your background is almost a body paragraph.
No thesis / Thesis is not correct
Body paragraphs –
Paragraphs are not developed
Why do you write about personal views in a research paper?
In-text citations are not correct.
Counter Argument/Refutation paragraph – Is not correct
Explanation of counter argument is confusing.
No refutation
Or refutation is not correct
Conclusion- is not correct
No restated thesis
No summary
References are not correct – please check

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